I'm giving you an 8 because it leaves room for improvement. And that's what everyone really needs, something to strive for.

When I listen to music, I kinda go with the feeling to it rather than if I can dance to it or not. Emotional feeling from music for me ranges from happy to sad to all the in between. This is what I got from your music. I also go with what I imagine is happening, as if I was watching a video or a memory in my mind.

Vision- "Starts out on an older player, possibly a radio cassette, then jumps to a bigger boom box when the non faded beat goes in. This could also be a transition into a vibrant color or the over hook of an animation is established such as a motion or pulse of the style is established. The most I can see after this is robots mostly because I've been having this robot fetish lately, and because I got a bit mixed up with all the different sounds coming through to me. The ending seconds is a robot or something breaking up.

Emotion and Feeling-

I got more of a personal feeling from this track. Not too big on emotion, but more about you as a composer. Just a reflection of who you are as a person. If I had to say an underlying tone of it all, it's a different type of fun. If people stick around long enough, they hear some pretty interesting things, different maybe, but still sensical in an offlooked eye.

Overview-

You definetely got something going for you. Not in this piece, but I'm sure you have others that have that perfect snap you like to reflect on. You have a variety of sources you grasp from, even though I think organization is a type of beauty too. You got the stuff in this piece, but the ending, the final note was missing that final zing that would make me want to listen to it countless times. The new types of sound did make me listen to it about 9 times, which is something good if you can harness it.